g'day gentle reader
as promised ProWritingAid's five remaining errors turned out to be ordinary boring abbreviations of a space opera kind: comms (2) for communications , 1 each of techos (1) and unsuit (1). ProWritingAid informed me there were 'no such words'. The fifth and last error was a preference for air-con rather than aircon (1). PWR also had a couple of
style suggestionsstronger adjective than hot (boiling scalding scorching) This was a simple case of misconstruction, which hot-water spigot solved.
and a couple of rubbery eggs ... readability may be enhanced by and two rubbery eggs. It may, but it will also loose the comic flavour - I left that one alone beside Australian usage (er - mine) does not necessarily mean exactly two. (give it a couple of days, she'll be right = 2 at least days.)
hadn’t damaged anything to had damaged nothing readability again ( more positive - accepted)
[ "Both were crammed" into her life pod ] passive verbs make your writing less direct. Good advice but the suggestions were nonsensical in the context [ "I/we/they crammed both" into her life pod ] they are already there.
like Word, PWA wants to convert all We'll have to to We must, but must is not always appropriate it depends on the context. Sometimes what is mean is We aught to.
I loved this one
the electrics are shot, as one character says to the other meaning the electrical circuits no longer function. PWA said they/I/we/it shoot/s the electrics Seriously?
And it seems to me the program does not yet have a handle on dialog.